Comic 433 - Go
24th Nov 2016, 8:06 PM in A Few Days First
Go
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Author Notes:
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view
Hm, not sure about this page. I tried some stuff and I don't think it really worked.
User comments:
ephonk edit delete reply
you might be thinking about the window, right? took me a second to figure out the geometry. There's a thing you're doing in the first panel that i think is really interesting with the black zones. it's like navigating through a game in noclip mode, as if I'm seeing a corridor from the other side of the wall.
Also, the rain looks good, in case you're unsure about that.
I like it when you experiment...
Dragonrider edit delete reply
Dragonrider
Looks like Sean is making a lifelong commitment to Alis as of now. BTW what do Sean's parents think about the situation>
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
You think she's about to die ?
cattservant edit delete reply
cattservant
New set of lungs?
Zombie Pancake edit delete reply
View said there were two chapters left. There had better not be two chapters of dead Alis. I don't think I could handle that.
Greeb (Guest) edit delete reply
This is the part of the story where we find out 'x' and then a buuuuuuuuunch of pages suddenly make more sense.
cattservant edit delete reply
cattservant
Surgery?
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
"Alis" is about to become "Allen" ! :D
Greeb (Guest) edit delete reply
I think she's already quite happy with her current joy buzzer.
Lyon edit delete reply
Lyon
Ominous...
jmkool edit delete reply
I'm going to be optimistic and propose that the heartwrenching twist in this is that Alis gets new lungs and the two lovebirds actually do wind up living happily every after.
Guestidigititis (Guest) edit delete reply
"living" could be easily replaced by "diving"
Bellar edit delete reply
Bellar
Hrm, not sure what that second to last panel adds to the pacing on this page. It's like the briefest pause visually.

Maybe it will make more sense when the next few pages are available though.
marmelmm edit delete reply
marmelmm
Well, any page with SeanTush(tm) is a good page. ;)
Greeb (Guest) edit delete reply
Uhoh. Generally the only time your surgery gets moved up is when the doctor's don't believe you'll make it to the later date. Guess the boat trip didn't leave her unscathed.
Guest (Guest) edit delete reply
We never got an actual sex scene! We got a lot of teasing and flirting, but no mutual satisfaction! I firmly believe the next chapter will be Alis happily recovering, before the final chapter is the scene we've all been waiting for, with a "happily ever after" for the end.
wiseguy edit delete reply
wiseguy
Based on my zero amount of artistic experience, I'd say that having Sean's reaction in it's own wide frame would have been fine, but the current layout translates Sean's feelings as well. It's just more subtle.

I'm stoked for this chapter! This plot just gets better.