Comic 422 - Station
30th Oct 2016, 6:14 PM in Solo Dive
Station
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Author Notes:
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Sorry about the delay. My art might be a bit wobbly for a while due to the new tablet, hopefully it'll work out.
User comments:
Secretkeeper626 (Guest) edit delete reply
Well, the only way to get better is to make LOTS of bad stuff before you make good stuff!
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That's not a reassuring thing to hear about the page!
...(RockB) edit delete reply
...(RockB)
Nothing wobbly that I could see. Page is great!

Hope you're not insulted but I like it even better than some of the older ones.
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I'm horribly offended that you like this page! Pretty awful of you.
RandomTroll (Guest) edit delete reply
Did sean tear a muscle or a ligament or break her arm or something I missed?
Bellar edit delete reply
Bellar
Maybe a strain? She did yank someone in mid-dive to a full reverse.
Jst56strong edit delete reply
Jst56strong
I'm just happy everyone survived.
Secretkeeper626 (Guest) edit delete reply
She had a concussion, remember?
Kanada (Guest) edit delete reply
does sean's super-strength pose a threat to her, as well? maybe there's more than one reason she's afraid to get rough.
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
Cara had a concussion, not Sean.

And the idea that Sean's super strength takes a lot of energy, would make sense - And it would also make for an interesting balance act, in times of need.
Secretkeeper626 (Guest) edit delete reply
Oops! I thought you were talking about Cara, sorry!
Dragonrider edit delete reply
Dragonrider
Wonder how much of the hanky panky they described in their report. Are Alis and Sean holding hands? Looks like their arms are intertwined, and Alis looks like she wants to get out of there and get someplace where she can care for Sean.
@RandomTroll: I would suspect the way she grabbed him out of the water, threw him around like a rag doll put a strain on the shoulder. Adrenalin is a good thing but it comes at a high price in the extreme cases like this was.
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I think they left the hanky-panky out of the report.
Damnatio edit delete reply
Damnatio
Your art is amazing still.
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view
Well, some good, some bad.
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
Heh, is it just me who find it funny that it was Sean who conked out first ? :)
Meddy (Guest) edit delete reply
Wel she's probably the only one who stayed awake the whole time instead of taking a nap in the middle.
Lyon edit delete reply
Lyon
The look on Alis face... haha
Not knowing what they were... I have a couple guesses as to what that means but I'm sure we'll find out what it means 100% eventually.

View, your work is as great as ever.
klondike (Guest) edit delete reply
No complaints about the art, the drawing looks quite cool.

But the pacing is a bit odd. Somehow I feel the timejump would have been the perfect spot for a chapter transition.
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It is. I'm trying an experiment where I do a jump just before the chapter break instead of during.

If it really annoys you, you can always swap this page and the next one!
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
I think it's more a case of us being used to have them at chapter breaks.

I don't see any problem with it being at the end of a chapter though. :)
klondike (Guest) edit delete reply
It is what Sheela said :)

Most works set up transitions at time jumps to make the viewer/reader aware that such a thing has happened. So it just strikes a bit odd.

That said, a time jump before the chapter end saying a bit of what can be expected for the next chapter can make the readers interested and kind of anxious (which in this case is a good thing) for knowing what will happen.

As I said, I just found the whole thing odd in this situation but I can't put my finger on why. I mean odd in the spanish way of a bit strange and not as it being unnerving or annoying :)
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view
Dunno, I was out of commission for a week, so my finger isn't on the flow, I guess.
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
*checks paw for fingers*

Dammit - No fingers! :(
TeeKay edit delete reply
TeeKay
I think that when it comes to pacing, go with what you think is right even if you're just experimenting.

I've always considered pacing one of your strong points and one of the things that sets your work apart from most other webcomics I read.

(Although what do I know... I'm nothing more than just a random reader >_>)
A Fan (Guest) edit delete reply
I find the lips in the first pannel funny, otherwise great art.
marmelmm edit delete reply
marmelmm
Art looks fine to me!

Though I will confess I'll miss all those snarky remarks on the placeholder page... :D
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
Snarky comments ?

I have no idea what you're talking about. >_<
sigpig edit delete reply
sigpig
"Hm. Fantastic work." Nothing said about how they're lucky to be alive and (relatively) unharmed.

Interesting word: "work". Almost making it seem as if Cara is "working" for the Police...
Secretkeeper626 (Guest) edit delete reply
Ex-Police? Undercover?
Shaylyn-KM edit delete reply
Shaylyn-KM
I'm flailing with excited anticipation
Also enjoying the variety of different poses on this page. It all looks incredibly natural.
TeeKay edit delete reply
TeeKay
You do look excited :P
Shaylyn-KM edit delete reply
Shaylyn-KM
My avatar will go down in history
sigpig edit delete reply
sigpig
It looks like it's not the only thing going down...
Shaylyn-KM edit delete reply
Shaylyn-KM
I was going to make that joke, but I thought it would be more fun to wait for someone else to. :P
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
Shay's avatar is entirely too excited for her own good. :)
ColdFusion (Guest) edit delete reply
Looks like any other page, I think you're back into the swing.
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view
How dare you have neutral opinions on this page!

...

And with that, the trifecta of mock offense is complete.

Well, in seriousness, it's good to be back.
eire1274 edit delete reply
eire1274
OK, now you are posting again, and I'm not...

*stepping up to the horse, eyeing the stirrup*

'Bout time for me to start drawing again, I think.
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
Do eeeet !
Auren edit delete reply
Auren
Is that a marijuana plant in the police station?
psianogen (Guest) edit delete reply
Looks like a Japanese Maple to me, which does have leaves that look like marijuana.