Comic 399 - Spark
15th Aug 2016, 8:05 PM in Out of It
Spark
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I hate this page, but I couldn't think of anything better.
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Guest (Guest) edit delete reply
Well I love this page. I dunno that I've ever seen an orgasm represented so accurately, subtly, and sexily - and in just two panels too.

Also love Sean's expression in the last panel. So good.

Keep up the good work View.
DocMesa edit delete reply
I like the use of the "warmth" in this page to represent the tingly feelings from Sean's climax.
Dragonrider edit delete reply
Dragonrider
The only thing I might suggest would be some wetness around Alis's mouth. The expressions and art are fantastic. Next page she at least deserves a long voluntary kiss initiated by Sean as a, "Thanks, I needed that".
WolfePaws edit delete reply
WolfePaws
I love that wash of heat across Sean's body, and how it contrasts with her skin tone.
As others have said, it's a really successful representation of orgasm.
marmelmm edit delete reply
marmelmm
What Wolfe said. Also, given Sean's strength, remarkable self-control on her part...
TeeKay edit delete reply
TeeKay
Look at Alis' hands in the last panel :P

I think there was probably some unintentional squeezing going on there...
Miao edit delete reply
Miao
It's pretty.

The page too.

And EVERYONE noticing is lovely.
Zaranthan (Guest) edit delete reply
Once again, the sparing use of color works amazingly.
█████ (Guest) edit delete reply
You do such <i>wonderful</i> things with colour.
Guest (Guest) edit delete reply
Oh cara, you so silly
Guest (Guest) edit delete reply
If I could offer some unsolicited constructive criticism.

Sean looks very off-balance. Like, would-be-struggling-to-stay-upright-even-if-she-was-pulling-on-Alis'-arms off-balance.

my unprofessional and shittily drawn visual representation http://imgur.com/PZS767J.jpg
view edit delete reply
view
Yup, that's one of the problems with this page.
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
Alis looking smug in that last panel. :)
WolfePaws edit delete reply
WolfePaws
And wondering if blood will ever flow to her fingertips again.