Comic 376 - Unload
28th May 2016, 3:58 PM in Out of It
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Author Notes:
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OK, much better than the previous take.

Here's last page's panel in full-size, because some of you weirdos wanted it.
User comments:
Ghost(Ghost) edit delete reply
You're right, the composition and pacing are improved. We give you a hard time about your perfectionism -- partly because we're protective of your self-esteem and partly because we're just eager for the next strip. But we're not really sincere about it, because our respect for you as a creator is such that we give you a wide berth about craft and revision alike. Your prerogative, dude.
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Passerby (Guest) edit delete reply
Heh, Sean in panel 1 and 2 (always) makes me think of this: :D

Movie main title sequence

OST 'studio' version

You sure Sean isn't from Krypton, View? XD

But seriously, Sean must have done A LOT of weightlifting before the comic started and you hinted at it in an early page of the comic from way back near the beginning of it. :)

Thanks for the wallpaper sized version of panel 3 from the previous page! (^_^)

Thanks for sharing this webcomic with all of your readers, View and have a nice day. :)
sigpig edit delete reply
I second this. Great post, Ghost^2!
Sheela edit delete reply
Having not seen the other page, I have no idea wether it was better or worse, but I trust View in this.

Do it like you want it. :)
view edit delete reply
It's way better, I'm glad you folks like it more.
Sheela edit delete reply
We're glad, that you're glad! :D
RandomTroll edit delete reply
Someone wants to engage in the sexy times ASAP.

Alis seems to be thinking a bit jealous of sean complimenting another person.
Damnatio edit delete reply
Thank you. :D

And Alis is totally adorable as fuck in today's page.
Miao edit delete reply
I agree with this statement and this sentiment.
Guest (Guest) edit delete reply
Alis' eyyyyesssss <333
ahh that last panel is maybe one of the greatest in the entire comic in terms of character development
view edit delete reply
I was pretty happy when I redid the page and the script worked out!
Sheela edit delete reply
Alis wants her stuff carried tooo! :)
Damnatio (Guest) edit delete reply
I'll bet Alis wants to be carried instead.
WolfePaws edit delete reply
Love that little dimple in Sean's skin where it meets Alis' nose.
view edit delete reply
It was fun to draw!
Sheela edit delete reply
Enjoying the details are we ? :)
Lysander edit delete reply
[musical notes]
It's time for a...
No, it's time for a...
Waterpolo Match!
[/musical notes]
Meddy (Guest) edit delete reply
Wow, almost crushed his foot with this.
Deamon edit delete reply
Great job on this page. Of course, I'll forever be curious of what the original page looked like before it was taken down.
Jst56 still to lazy (Guest) edit delete reply
(Last panel) There are many fish in the sea but this one here is my fish. Don't touch my fucking fish.
Dinglebot edit delete reply
Nice job expanding the panel out. Glad I could help
Miao edit delete reply
Looking back....this is the most girly we've ever seen Alis, I think.
eire1274 edit delete reply
That last panel was BEAUTIFUL!!!

You were right, Manga Studio 4 is a lot of learning. So I got myself pretty comfortable with it, and... upgraded to Clip Studio. So now I'm relearning everything. LOL!
view edit delete reply
It's a good program.
eire1274 edit delete reply
As a techie, I'm loving it. But I have post-its everywhere on tools and controls!

"I'm too old for this shit."

Name the movie.