Comic 360 - Fetch
7th Apr 2016, 9:38 PM in Groundhog Week
Fetch
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Author Notes:
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view
This page took FOREVER and I'm really not happy with it.
User comments:
Ghost(Ghost) edit delete reply
Ghost(Ghost)
Well that makes one of us.
RandomTroll edit delete reply
RandomTroll
Good page, nothing wrong here.

Kitty cat seems to be enjoying the attention.
popisfizzy (Guest) edit delete reply
This page looks great *and* is hot, so at least I can't see a good reason to not be satisfied.
Invitado (Guest) edit delete reply
First comment to derail your authority, view, on my instaboner.
Don't make it less precious. I'ts hard as steel, you know?
Guestidigititis (Guest) edit delete reply
YOU may not be happy with it, view, but Alis looks ECSTATIC.
Dragonrider edit delete reply
Dragonrider
Using that wand will let the family know what is going on, those things are not quiet.
view edit delete reply
view
This is the future, and the best use of science fiction tech is making things vibrate more quietly. It's not like she would have been able to use a loud one before, so she didn't get a loud one.
TDL edit delete reply
The future is bright.
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
Besides, future sound insulation has improved !
Bellar edit delete reply
Bellar
I like the lack of sound the future makes!
TDL edit delete reply
Yay! This provides me with a bit of an explanation for a few pages ago regarding what Sean was saying and doing regarding mental contraints...now I don't know whether Sean did that intentionally as a means of placating Alis, or whether, similar to a lot of things she's done in the past with her, she just lucked into some impressive psychology like she did with the flirting.

I was going to say in the little preview we got that Sean was probably going to go for a specific item, if she was going in the closet at all, and lo, such was the case (albiet not the item I was expecting at the time). I do wonder though whether to follow Ocam's Razor on this point and go with the obvious thought of 'she's thought of Alis masturbating with it' as opposed to 'HOW' one masturbates with it, with Alis being her demonstration toy.

The third option would be that Sean wishes to correct some aspect of Alis' behaviour (like incorrect button-fixing) and is wanting to use pleasure/spanks reinforcement to stop it, but that seems unlikely.

To me, the second seems most likely, as Sean, as-stated and seen doesn't seem to treat Alis as someone 'sexy', but at the same time....Sean is perhaps a little too green or innocent to just go about changing Alis behaviour. It seems the most straightforward thing of 'How to apply a back-massager into a masturbation tool' and using Alis as the demonstrator is the most sensible approach.

Which also puts an interesting spin on why she knocks Alis' hands away from her crotch- not only because Alis lacked PERMISSION to cover herself, but also because Sean wants minimal tampering with the 'results' of this experiment and so Alis touching herself a little would be a no-no.

Regarding the art, I very much like Alis' look in panel 7. I feel maybe she's misunderstanding some of Sean's interest, but the implied order of requiring permission to hide herself is no different regardless of intent, and you get a lovely change in posture in panel 8 to show Alis' interpretation of it, a slightly widened stance and arms behind her back- she definitely has a feel for 'playing' towards this dominant side she's experiencing from Sean and revelling in it.

The only thing I'm not so sure on is whether it's Sean who'll be doing it or Alis...perhaps Sean. I know if I want to know how something works, I would test it myself. And also...I think Sean may wish to get more out of it that her initial piqued curiousity.

It shall be fun to find out how wrong I am! And don't sweat the drawing of it so much, I know you might not be happy with the enforced dead-space around panel 7, but it does serve a good focusing purpose and it all seems fine!
view edit delete reply
view
It's more about the crappy poses and anatomy.
Marimari (Guest) edit delete reply
Not at all! I think the anatomy and poses look great. It's nice to see the contrast in bodytype and pose between Sean and Alis -- and even some of the contrast between the appearance of the same character. Like the contrast between how Alis looks in panel 4, where she's small and shy and more simply-rendered (reflecting how she's hiding herself), and then in subsequent panels how she's revealed and her toned body is more prominent. Sharp lines, strong angles, a focus on form. Something *mechanical* (without the automaton implications of the word) that has a function, that can be activated and stimulated into a particular response.
TeeKay edit delete reply
TeeKay
My first thought was that the thing that's been stuck in Sean's head is the incident with the belt buckle a while back. With Alis posed as she is and with that wand in hand, she can finish what she inadvertently started back then.

The addition of controlling Alis through words and will rather than by superior physical strength is new though :P
TDL edit delete reply
Interesting idea there Tek; I do suppose it's possible Sean wants to investigate that as well, considering Alis gave a rather cagey response to it regarding Sean's inquiries about if it hurt or not. I suppose it depends on how much Sean is looking for explanations for things rather than demonstrations.

Nice thought though regardless.
cattservant edit delete reply
cattservant
Clear the deck!
RandomTroll edit delete reply
RandomTroll
For what? a flood?
cattservant edit delete reply
cattservant
Incoming!
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
Flooding might occur!
WolfePaws edit delete reply
WolfePaws
Looking forward to it!
Deamon edit delete reply
I guess you can say things are about to get BUMPY!

Get it? Because a vibrator bumps along. Actually, a better description would obviously be 'vibrate', but if you were to put it on the floor it would bump around. Ya get what I mean though, right?
TeeKay edit delete reply
TeeKay
Sean is about to shake things up?
Susu edit delete reply
Susu
Alis is shaking with anticipation.
Ghost(Ghost) edit delete reply
Ghost(Ghost)
Hey Susu, that's a great avatar.
Guesstimate (Guest) edit delete reply
Aye, we might even see what else is in her closet, I am hoping for one of these http://www.inversion-table-therapy.com/images/image1182_xlarge.jpg
Guesstimate (Guest) edit delete reply
Probably just going to be a doorway to a candle lit room with several photos of Sean
marmelmm edit delete reply
marmelmm
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3
Council (Guest) edit delete reply
Well ,I can assure everybody here that I won't be here for a year now........
Hope things will....progress in my absents.. Good bye.....Commander(ESPECIALY YOU VIEW FOR PLAYING AS THE COMMANDER!!!!!)
view edit delete reply
view
Oh, if you're leaving, I hope you have a nice time while you're away.
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
Um ... who are you again ?
Have we seen you before ?
TeeKay edit delete reply
TeeKay
I'm guessing someone who doesn't like view's .. teasing pacing :P
Furee (Guest) edit delete reply
I see your reasons for not liking this, but as those reasons are highly illogical I am choosing to ignore them.
Talon (Guest) edit delete reply
Personally I love this page. The styles isn't bad at all and neither are the poses. It's a work of brilliance to me.
Miao edit delete reply
Miao
Playing shy, Alis? Really?

Really, it i a good page View. But your striving for perfection make a mark.
Guest (Guest) edit delete reply
Does Sean change which hand she's holding the vibrator in between panels 4 & 5?
drapes edit delete reply
She does, yeah
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
It's one of those things you can do with hands!
They can do all sorts of other things too. :)

But nicely spotted.