Comic 33 - Small
18th Mar 2014, 10:04 PM in First Friday
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I'm a little worried about this machine. Cross my fingers!
User comments:
Danger wasp edit delete reply
Danger wasp
the fucking detail you put into the swimsuits, wrinles, folds, nipple bleeds and all, Oh ma god!!!!
cattservant edit delete reply
This suits us very well!

[If Alis had a sleeve,
her heart would be on it!]
Sheela edit delete reply
Heh, reminds me of a shirt my sister has, lovely black velvet with red hearts sewn onto the sleeves. :)
RhinocerosGoggles edit delete reply
I'm afraid I'm not sure what Alis is saying. Anyone care to translate?

"xxx, are you xxxxx"
Sheela edit delete reply
Aw, Allis is adorable in her old 'n' tattered swimsuit.

Can't understand what she's saying though.
Phuji edit delete reply
I think we just found the person who's going to teach Alis how to swim. So that's cool.

That being said, I have no idea what she said in panel 4 and have spent too much time staring at that blurred gibberish trying to decipher it. View plz...
view edit delete reply
Not that it matters, but she's saying "Wait, are you listen-"
Gdv (Guest) edit delete reply
I got "Well, are you listening" but mostly guesswork from the scene.

It's interesting having to read a character through more than text, instead of trying to on top of text.
Phuji edit delete reply
It is nice to read her expressions. But if there's text, even if it's blurred and distorted, I like to at least try to decipher it.

You are doing really well on her body language and facial expressions though View.