Comic 294 - Bump
19th Oct 2015, 10:51 PM in Crowd
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Author Notes:
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Not sure about this page. :P
User comments:
Runesavaan edit delete reply

You are the king of.... this. I can't even think of the right term at the moment. Tension?
Sheela edit delete reply
Hedrah edit delete reply
oh? fabric be broken?
RhinocerosGoggles edit delete reply
Sean tore Ali's top, under her right arm, on page 292.
Phuji edit delete reply
and you can clearly see on page 293.
view edit delete reply
I'm experimenting with how quickly different audience members notice different details. Did you two notice on those pages, or is it hindsight?
Runesavaan edit delete reply
I noticed after a few moments of looking at the page.
Lee M edit delete reply
Lee M
I'm always the last to notice little details like that. In the words of Manuel from Barcelona, "I know NUHHH-theeng."
Sheela edit delete reply
It's very hit-or-miss with me.
someytimes I notice details straight away, other times they go straight over my head.

*shrug* .. I'm a doggy, not too good at this stuff. :D
RhinocerosGoggles edit delete reply
It looks like a tear, rather then a popped clasp. It was noticeable at the time.
Bryony edit delete reply
I noticed it on 293 first.
Bellar edit delete reply
Speaking of broken bathing suits, it looks like Alis was wearing crotchless bikini bottoms, if page 293 isn't just a coloring error.
view edit delete reply
Just on 293? OK, that's good info.
PainfulBuggery edit delete reply
I suspect the flimsiness of the swimsuit designs are done on purpose now.
view edit delete reply
RhinocerosGoggles edit delete reply
Cara did bring spare suits...
BigChonny edit delete reply
*twitch* is right. poor alis...
cattservant edit delete reply
Guest (Guest) edit delete reply
I suspect Alis is just as frustrated as we are.
Gock edit delete reply
i think it's slowly becoming clear that this isn't about Alis' frustration and making the reader feel it too (even though that certainly is a side effect) - this really is about seans deeper problems. she's always blocking somehow, she never *really* stated her intentions, and as seen here or in the after-birthday-party strips is definitely trying to be nice or even maybe intimate, but always stops herself, here she even literally draws back.. there are some deeper issues here.

Guest (Guest) edit delete reply
Sean's 'I'm keeping this for later' face.
Bellar edit delete reply
Can it be called a souvenir if the fun hasn't yet begun?
marmelmm edit delete reply
Teasing, thy name is View. ;)
Sparticus (Guest) edit delete reply
I saw that Alis's muscles twitched all over once the goggles bumped her. Not just her hand.
Miao edit delete reply
Alis is going to do somethign drastic.

Well, she WOULD do somethign drastic if she weren't so submissive.

Yes, Alis is submissive. Submissive=/=non-agressive.
Guest (Guest) edit delete reply
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