Comic 234 - Sound FX
23rd Apr 2015, 8:18 PM in B+
Sound FX
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Author Notes:
view edit delete
This was goofy to draw.
User comments:
Shaylyn-KM edit delete reply
Lol, what's goin' on?
Vi (Guest) edit delete reply
A rocket is taking off in the distance, and the sound is delayed because of this distance.
Mister Flames edit delete reply
That's the way it worked when I watched Space Shuttles and other launches back when I lived near Cape Canaveral.
Nice (Guest) edit delete reply
So wait did her friend facepalm and then that was that?

That's actually pretty funny. Just like



"What? What about Alis Ma?"


"Ooohhhkkkaaayyyy then."
pkrankow edit delete reply
One 4th of July I was in Wyoming, USA, camping with my parents and brothers. (I was in middle school at the time). The fireworks show we were watching was about 2 1/2 miles away, over a very large valley. People we were sitting with were confused because we were going "Bang...Bang.Bang........Bang...Bang" with the flashes. The sound was showing up 10 seconds later. EXACTLY IN THE PATTERN WE WENT "BANG"

Too much fun for a bunch of kids.
A reader. (Guest) edit delete reply
Seems to be jumping around quite a bit. Meeting Sagis Ma, having her insist on Sean visiting Friday. That made sense. Then no real transition panels, and Sean is pulled in to talk about grades, then a conversation with her friends showing how obvlious she is to how her relationship with Alis looks to people they know, then a scene with a rocket. I get why your showing the grade, and friend scene, I imagine we may understand the rocket one soon. I just think there needs to be a softer transition. Something to precipitate the beginning of a new scene, different location, passage of time, etc. Just some hopefully creative criticism for you to consider. I'm sure you'll understand where I'm coming from. I do love your characters, and your story though. I was just a bit thrown with how it's jumped around lately. In general keep up the good work. Looking forward to more interactions between Alis, and Sean. :)
view edit delete reply
Transitions are my weak point.
Lee M edit delete reply
Lee M
But all you need to know about transitions is, don't start a sentence with one.
Irony. (Guest) edit delete reply
Transitions should never be the word to start a sentance, because they ruin it entirely. Transitioning at the very start of a sentance is bad.
Lee M edit delete reply
Lee M
And the Lord saw that it was good...
A reader. (Guest) edit delete reply
A reader. (Guest) edit delete reply
Sorry, for the wall of text. >.>
A reader. (Guest) edit delete reply
Just takes practice like everything else. You'll get it down eventually. No worries. :)