Comic 384 - Quiet
24th Jun 2016, 10:03 PM in Out of It
Quiet
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I hope this page is clear!
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RhinocerosGoggles edit delete reply
I'm really happy that you continue to share your stories with us, view. Great page!

On the matter of clarity: I'm unsure of Cara's intentions. If she's a sub, she didn't want Sean to find out...Has she been trying to manipulate Sean into dominating her?
TDL edit delete reply
Aha...

I think the first and third panels are weighted in importance here. The first having a kind of genuine realization about it, and the third being the expression of one who has taken on board Sean's true feelings, but also knowing (from panel 2) that Sean is quite content to continue to play, and to say the things and act the way Cara needs Sean to act in order to help her get off.

So, acceptance out the way, it frees Cara up to have an even better time and, as I thought she might, splay herself mentally for Sean, running into something of a stream-of-consciousness babble- the eyes are very effective here, as if too small to actually see Sean, or nimbly focused on her own wants or so forth.

I think the small touches in the mid-panels are important to, as, given what we saw before when Cara fell against her, I think Sean is not really looking to physically join in, or do touching or to even be touched- that right reserved for her proper toy.But she is willing to see how an open Cara reacts to direction, knowing how she likes to be 'seen' and analyzed (I think her burblings about the corkboard are part of a fantasy, from having seen how intense Sean's gaze can be).

The last panel I think shows this very nicely, like...Sean has put a key in Cara's ignition and just turned it; you get the feeling from her expression that she's come of of her sudden surprise and is somewhere very responsive mentally from how she's looking up. Like a test subject waiting for further analysis via probing, of a different sort.

Alis is subtley different I think, in how she seems so alive with such stimuli, as opposed to this near-blankness...it shall be nice to see what further differences will appear as Sean continues to work Cara apart!
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
Sean is definitly trying to figure Cara's sexuality out.
Heck, she has even said as much.

Looks like the experimentation has begun. :)
Lee M edit delete reply
Lee M
Cripes. To swallow that popsicle, Cara would need a pretty... oh, what's the phrase...?
Guest (Guest) edit delete reply
Weak gag reflex?
Lee M edit delete reply
Lee M
Yeah, it was a pretty weak gag at that.
marmelmm edit delete reply
marmelmm
LOL!
RandomTroll edit delete reply
RandomTroll
Robitic Throat?

Synthetic skin and neural mimics set to low?
jamie59 edit delete reply
jamie59
Cold deep throat practice.
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
I wonder if that makes it easier or harder ?
Miao edit delete reply
Miao
Harder. Definitely harder.
Marimari edit delete reply
View is always the best at drawing wet/dripping things :)

There's something really fun and meta about this interaction between Sean and Cara. Cara obviously had an initial mental picture of how Sean would treat her in this, which then gets adjusted and builds on itself and really gets Cara going as she plays with the idea -- and then Sean shuts her up, turning the meta-talk about dominance-play into dominance-play itself.

Finally, I'm loving those very evocative sound effects that are always just out of frame and obscured. So much power in not showing things...
Sheela edit delete reply
Sheela
Cara is definitly getting excited about something.
Though it may just be the dick in her pussy.
Lysander edit delete reply
Lysander
Brain freeze mixed with orgasm. Hmmm. Not sure if that's something I'd want to experience. But to each their own.

The oxygen-scrubbing patches must make choke-play a little safer. Though they would still need to be careful about blood flow.
wiseguy edit delete reply
wiseguy
That's a great observation. You could definitely do prolonged choking if I'm understanding the scrubbers correctly
Zav (Guest) edit delete reply
Wouldn't that be super painful? Ya know, with something ice cold pressing into her teeth?
suoer (Guest) edit delete reply
Binge read the series. It was freakin great.